ok, So I wasn't the only one who considers this manga to not be a good way to present SCP. In my opinion, most of the issues with it comes down to the way its written. One part is trying to explain SCP for new people, another goes into the manga making process, then you have the actual manga within the story (in my opinion the best part) and then the fourth part is the mystery of where the "Name (TL note: when talking about name in this part ONLY means storyboard)" comes from.
It's obvious that the writing is way too scattered within these 4 aspects, so the best part is the one the author adapted from actual SCP articles. Starting for the "introduction to SCPs", I think this is not a good way to introduce people into SCPs, the blond dude is knowledgeable about it, but ends up giving lacking explanations that obviously give the other dude more questions than answers, then, this black haired dude tries investigating on his own, but ends up purposely not understanding anything. Even if somehow it is related to the mystery part, it just ends up being frustrating.
In terms of the manga making part, it goes heel deep into the process, mainly setting the stage for the SCP conversation and the mystery, so it feels like wasted time that could be used for the mystery part, which is the second-best part as it handles the metanarrative well enough. I can't really criticize the mystery yet, since it is just beginning, but It does make me wonder what will happen with specific SCPs that have heavy involvement with the foundation, if the manga itself goes long enough.