Sea of June - Ch. 1

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I get what's going on but something about the order or the writing makes it seem way more confusing than it is. Weird chapter.
 
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@Pyoro Because it tries to be "artsy" but there's no substance to back it up. The story is pretty simple and the author tried to embellish it with the presentation. Something a competent editor would have pointed out. It's the same "mistake" some writers make when their sentences are overtly long or full of unnecessary adjectives.
 
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Huh, she’s wearing a wedding ring, so is she married? If so, where’s her partner? Wonder if that’ll come up.
 
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'It's been a long time' makes this not easy to understand what's going on, I mean what happened in between her being saved and waking up. Future updates shall explain, I hope..... For the chapter, thanks.
 
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@91199535164911 I assume she's referring to having met in the past., when they agreed to be together (probably a childhood promise of some kind). But now somehow the human heroine forgot, despite immediately recognizing the voice out on the sea ...
 
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thank you for the translation, this was a great chapter, I was not expecting this to take place in 1936. Anyway I like how the wedding ring was reserved only for the last few pages. The mermaid somehow manages to be both adorable and sensual at the same time which is normally a tough thing to balance... though when she shows her actual eyes the red in them makes her seem more predatory then someone who has merely come rescue/reclaim their lover/mate.
 
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Promising. don't know why some people rate it so low but I really think it should be interesting. Thanks for the chapter
 
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parece promissor vou acompanhar e ver no que rola
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) altas expectativas já que a arte é lindona
 
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Looks promising.though possible threat of a husband incoming....

Thank you for the translations!!❤
 
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*Reads the first chapter*
*Looks at the tags... no tragedy tag detected*
*Glances at the chapter thumbnails on the official website*
*Reads at the first chapter again*

...I'm tentatively trusting y'all on this not being a tragedy... but I'm still worried as heck. 😶
 

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