Sei-jun Ecstasy: XXX Shinai to Derarenai Heya de Mazoku o Buttaoshimasu - Vol. 1 Ch. 5 - The Impregnable

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I want this to be the origin story of Beowulf from Rosen Garten Saga with his 3 "sword" style
 
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Snrk. This whole manga is like, "Lewd Demon! Go to Horny Jail - The Manga".

It'll be peak comedy if we get a loli-demon and the MC is so mortified about the idea of dealing with her that he's afraid of being arrested by "federal agents".

Doubly so if she's screaming about being a grown woman and that she never asked to have such a small body. Possibly with a side order of, "I'm gonna prove to you that I'm a grown woman!" only to find out that, despite being an actual "adult", she was a virgin all along.

Oh, and the attitude she's copping makes her seem like a mesugaki in need of correction, which does not help her image at all. :meguusmug:

I wonder how many more tropes we can squeeze into this... :pepehmm:
This is very specific my guy.
 
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It'll be peak comedy if we get a loli-demon and the MC is so mortified about the idea of dealing with her that he's afraid of being arrested by "federal agents".

Doubly so if she's screaming about being a grown woman and that she never asked to have such a small body. Possibly with a side order of, "I'm gonna prove to you that I'm a grown woman!" only to find out that, despite being an actual "adult", she was a virgin all along.

Page 51 in Chapter 1, we see the other generals but only their shadows. Bottom left general looks pretty small with striped socks and horns up top.

You might just get your wish.
 
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Am i missing something??! Why does it feel like i skipped some points in this chapter. As if something was off. I mean, you know… it just feels odd somehow.
 
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I noticed two typos: 1) on page 20, "What a weak looking guy" should have a hyphen, as "weak-looking" is a singulr defining compound adjective; 2) on page 22, where Yomi states who she and the other generals are, the phrase should start with "We six generals..." because it's the subject, so "we", not "us", and I personally think that "the six generals" with commas to separate it from "we" looks better and solemner ("We, the six generals,...").
 
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Please put two page spreads before the separated pages. I think it's better to get the full picture first.

Thanks for translating this.
 

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