This is one of those manga where, without the art, would be a very boring story. Art carries this 100%.
I found it really weird how, you get the feeling that the author put some work into the setting, there's some depth to it.
Yet, at the same time, it's aa cookie cutter and uninspiring as it gets.
Dungeons. Levels. Stats. The main point of conflict being "People think I'm weak but actually OP maybe", and the girls come on swarming.
Not to mention, what's the point of making an esoteric class of magic, "Life magic", and then have it behave like an offensive class? That's like having a crafter become an OP warrior.
Just write a warrior.
What the author should've done instead, is have the MC be a competent supporter, or crafter, rather than be recognized as a strong fighter.
It feels like the author was really into the
D-genesis LN, and tried to copy it, while also copying every other trope on the market.
What's next, a tournament arc? Being dumped by the hero party as a background story?
I wanna point out that I'm dumping all of that, because A) gotta do something on the toilet, and B) because it genuinely seems like the author is capable of proper world-building. But gave way to too much marketable tropes.
Read up to 25, and I will revise this.Fun world build.
Disgustingly pathetic doormat of an MC
Read up to 25, and I will revise this.
Here's the entire story, every chapter...
Young girls:
I lurves mah teacher so much for no reason, and my panties are soaking wet with the thought of him!
Males:
We hate the MC!
We have no reason other than thecolor of his skin, religion, sexual preference, andmagic with which he was born!
And we all have interchangeable lines! Dur-hur-hur!
MC:
I despise myself,
I hate myself,
I am terrible,
I am a piece of shit,
I deserve to die,
I'm the worst,
I should just die,
I am a trash,
I hate myself ,
I despise myself,
I deserve to die,
I am terrible,
I am a piece of shit,
I despise myself,
I deserve to die,
I am a piece of shit,
I deserve to die,
I'm the worst,
I am terrible,
I should just die,
I deserve to die,
I am terrible,
I despise myself,
I deserve to die,
I despise myself,
I am terrible,
I hate myself,
I am terrible,
I deserve to die,
I am a piece of shit,
I despise myself,
I deserve to die,
I despise myself,
I'm the worst,
I am terrible,
I should just die,
I am terrible,
I am a trash,
I deserve to die,
I hate myself.
Every. Single. Page.
And there ya go folks! I read it so y'all don't have to!
The question, however, remains:
How is this entertainment?!