Seikishi ni Natta kedo Danchou no Oppai ga Sugosugite Kokoro ga Kiyomerarenai - Vol. 1 Ch. 6

[hybras]

I'm not saying I'm against that kind of worldbuilding entirely but it needs better execution. If we're ACTUALLY doing this realistically there would've been some sort of checks and balances system that would've stopped this from ever happening.
"What if he bribed them too?"
Then actually SHOW that happening, don't just handwave it with "oh realism"
It's not a utopia to want an organization that at least TRIES to stick with it's message. You're using the same excuse just reworded.

Yes, world building. That works. As the concept of making the author creating the backstory of why every evil villian became an evil villian would be within the same argument as yours.

Instead of "hand waving" evil villians just to come into existwnce, we must delve into the reason why the evil villian became so.

We would run into an argument whether or not it is necessary to make backstories to explain every evil thing origin story to make the story too long, or it turns it into a filler. Or we could argue if the backstory is too short if the author explains the reason in a single page and makes a "weak" "world building" experience, as per you say.


World building isn't a problem, but the author can run into issues of getting side tracked too much, and he just started the story. A lot of people have short attention span due to things like twitter and youtube shorts. Its not like we are hundreds of chapters in. You need to keep the audience entertained to put food on the table.

If you want a well fleshed out manga at the start, either the author must be a seasoned pro so he can ignore the publisher warning about getting side tracked with "world building", self publish. Or you can read books. Like fiction books.

 

[erintem]

I'm not saying I'm against that kind of worldbuilding entirely but it needs better execution. If we're ACTUALLY doing this realistically there would've been some sort of checks and balances system that would've stopped this from ever happening.
"What if he bribed them too?"
Then actually SHOW that happening, don't just handwave it with "oh realism"
It's not a utopia to want an organization that at least TRIES to stick with it's message. You're using the same excuse just reworded.

This reminds me a lot of the anecdote where a guy said to a girl “have you never seen a movie before? You watch it and information is revealed as you go”

I don’t care if you turn out to have a point later on, this is chapter 6 of an ecchi comedy with fairly fixed viewpoints, and you’re talking about a character introduced in the last page of the previous chapter as if it makes no sense that the story didn’t immediately launch into a 12 chapter backstory.

furthermore, “money talks, evil flourishes, good intentions are at the mercy of political corruption“ is already more explanation than most of this type of story is willing to give

 

[ninjamz]

something is wrong in the chapters i feel like im missing something because 6 here at the end mc said he wants to take a peek into the women's bathing but then chapter 7 start there was no mention or anything of that sort it's as if it got skipped

nevermind there was mention but the way they put it all together is so fucked and weird in a story like please don't do that but fucking hell it's not like the author will be able to read this

 

[Zwamp]

The Saint is completely fucking useless, and the 2nd and 5th division commanders belong in prison or at the gallows.

Don't worry, in series like this they never get what they deserve.....

 

[dbzclamp]

Little confused about a couple of things:

• Wasn't Ruga already placed with the 6th division? Why is he just getting placed now?
• Didn't Chapter 4 say that the 6th division always faces off against the 7th division? Why is the Saint saying they usually face off against the 4th division?

 

[Graywing]

Ah yes, gotta love the one dimensional villains.

 

[Kutabarie]

Authors seriously need to stop using slang not fitting to the setting. A world of swords and magic and somebody is spouting side-character" and "mob"?

 

[Seraphus]

Of you're allowing them 5th div to do this much, you've already decided to allow the social order to be destroyed.

I mean, it's not like you have a nation based upon the Rule of Law, is it?
You dont have a constitution, guaranteeing the rights of the individual, regardless of criminal action until conviction of felony behavior, right?
So.
Arrest him and his backers, torture them (the noble backers) until you get the evidence, and then hang them all publicly; it should take 3 days.

Problem.
Fucking.
Solved.

But, nah; you wanna whine and cry about it.
Either admit you want an end to social order, or do your fucking job.
But please, stop pretending everything is sunshine and flowers vs naughty-poo-poo Team Rocket... unless it is, and then say so.