Sekai ni Hitori, Zenzokusei Mahou no Tsukaite - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

[MangaDex]

 

[FightingBread]

I never liked this kind of cliches man
it's getting real silly.

 

[Terkke]

"the objective is to destroy the 200 targets"
proceeds to destroy the 200 targets undoubtedly
"your score is 1"

obviously...

 

[sherlock0790]

ah yes
the usual Trope "The meAsUreMEnT DeViCE unable to process more than XXX digit"
so you are belong to the lowest class...

 

[CrimsonNanashi]

Well Freya is who I choose as best girl of this series

 

[feha]

How annoying, counterstop tropes again. Except in this story it's obvious to the proctors, and they still decide to use the reported score. What is the meaning of having human supervision in the first place, if it wasn't so there could be human intervention when things ar out of the norm?

 

[omebude18]

If you want to put them in F class then fucking do it you p***y ass authors. Like is it harder to explain that you all start at the bottom and rise your way up or that all of these fucking teachers with long histories are fucking blind and stupid?

 

[sawada002]

Chapter 1,2,3 its good but it looks like getting to be a cliche mc with no knowledge about the world even tho he have a private tutor at home did she not teach him about the world? And how magic are usually use, and how strong magic are acceptable to common people to hide its true strength? This manga is good but cliche "hide true strength" is ruining it

 

[Happyfatkid90]

Thanks for the chapter

 

[ScryedParadox]

Considering the premise was already pretty cookie cutter and everything to date has been the standard setup, why is anyone surprised that this has as much depth as Smartphone in Another World?

I expect nothing but stereotypical tropes and the very same story copy pasted in some weird jumbled up puzzle. A perfectly standard 6/10 Isekai manga.

 

[hamsterking5]

sigh well this just went from good to trash.

 

[Smokron]

Yeah what a trash chapter. Hope this picks up but ugh hate those kind of tropes.

 

[UmbralStar]

"Sorry the counter's results are prioritized" said man who is responsible for being an eyewitness and reporting/correcting any errors. Thanks poorly thought out cliches.

 

[SonicWizard]

...This series is just a collection of tropes and cliches in the guise of a story.

I can't tell if the author is an absolute madlad and just trolling or they actually think that this is acceptable.


Edit: nevermind they also wrote "Break Through in Another World With Magical Eyes and Bullets!!" so it's confirmed that they just suck and should probably just stop writing entirely, lmao.

 

[Hadski]

The fucking cliches are killing me.

 

[ftpread]

I get it that the counter is there if the professor can't eyeball and count the targets, but EVERY ONE of them are destroyed, in this case you still "counter only shows 1 so your score is 1"

Cliche isekai like above, I'll probably get back to this if I ever run out of isekai troupe

 

[Solipsist]

Considering the premise was already pretty cookie cutter and everything to date has been the standard setup, why is anyone surprised that this has as much depth as Smartphone in Another World?

I expect nothing but stereotypical tropes and the very same story copy pasted in some weird jumbled up puzzle. A perfectly standard 6/10 Isekai manga.

Well, nobody is surprised about the cookie-cutter plot -- what is surprising is that the boy is clearly competent, yet they still make absolutely no personal judgement. I.E: The way it is written made the whole chapter seem absolutely stupid.

I mean, can a person who has 0 magic power, can even use magic? And then destroy all 200 pieces, which then gets counted as 1 because "hud durr the machine..."? etc...

If it's usually forced, this time it's exceptionally badly written.
P.S: It's because of stories like these that I wonder how bloody cheap is it to hire someone to draw such gorgeous comics for you? It's insane. So many of these stories get single-handedly carried by the art.

 

[Ovnidemon]

I agree with a lot of people. They should have made that he had 100020 or something and that the 2 others test were entirely automated. It would make it at least a little believable even if cliche. Here, the fact that the teachers see the errors in measurement make it totally absurd.

 

[ScryedParadox]

Well, nobody is surprised about the cookie-cutter plot -- what is surprising is that the boy is clearly competent, yet they still make absolutely no personal judgement. I.E: The way it is written made the whole chapter seem absolutely stupid.

I mean, can a person who has 0 magic power, can even use magic? And then destroy all 200 pieces, which then gets counted as 1 because "hud durr the machine..."? etc...

If it's usually forced, this time it's exceptionally badly written.
P.S: It's because of stories like these that I wonder how bloody cheap is it to hire someone to draw such gorgeous comics for you? It's insane. So many of these stories get single-handedly carried by the art.

I enjoy a bunch of cookie cutter plots and whatnot, I'm in the camp that a story told well is ultimately an entertaining story worth reading. After all, we keep rewatching very similar stories or eating similar meals means, we just want the execution done well.

A grilled cheese sandwich is just bread, butter and cheese. But a good grill cheese sandwich is always nice to eat. While one done badly, burnt bread, overly thicc cheese that hasn't melted and doesn't taste right, that's just crap.

In this case, to date it really did feel like it was going down the RTA for tropes. If you go back, the worldbuilding was relatively minimal so you couldn't judge, but the story beats were all very low effort copy paste of other similar isekai stories. The level of uniqueness was barr none, and everything was just trucking along to go from one trope to the next. Consider how it was discovered he had all elements and nobody really batted an eye on that from the common servant to his over the moon dunce parents. It was very clear that consistent world building would take a dive, nobody questioned his level of intellect either or really questioned his level of strength. Every other characters were behaving exactly as NPC side characters to help prop him up and move the story along.

This one chapter just happens to be the one most eggregious in your face obnoxiously evident that the author is uninspired and doing a collage of tropes that's more easily noticed.

So honestly. I wasn't surprised at all. You had two choices. Either he would be graded as incompetent and go the route of initially be set for the lowest class, underdog story. Or we begin his rise to power early and he gets sent to the super special SSS Class.

There was no middle ground here based on how the author was writing the story to date.

The next step is, will this be a Food Wars situation where the back end higher up go "Hey you failed him but we're going to sneak him into the super special SSS Class" or are they going to play the "Hey, you're in the F class, but secretly the F class is super competent while the SSS Class is a bunch of elitist dipshit for you to feel good about the F Class beating them up, except maybe the one romantic heroine that's in the SSS Class that's a really nice person except everyone else is a bully" route.

Edit: And the quality of his writing was also pretty sloppy from start to finish. I mean think about it, right off the bat the parents think he's a demon child and want to kill him. So they give the child out for adoption? That's unexplained, that's contrived, that's just setup for the run of the mill story bit we've seen in a few other isekai stories that have been written and printed to date.

We're just supposed to look the other way because his new parents are such great kind people, but logically it makes no sense and is honestly just as baffling as the examiners blatantly ignoring obvious test results. There is no logical follow-through. There is just the race to the next story trope so he can start being a misunderstood overpowered herbivore MC who will accidentally get a harem of underaged girl that he can legally shag with because he's a reincarnated pre-teen with the mind of an adult male and his harem will all be super elite women who he overpowers.

Again, I like my trashy stories, but I recognize what they are. I also want them written well, Harem in the Labyrinth of Another World for example to me is an example of a super trashy story written superbly well, though the pacing is absolutely slow as snails because the author takes so long to go over every step of the adventure, but I can recognize the thought, the consistency and the world building. And also that every character written, even though they're clearly made to be his harem to bang and adventure with, are given clear personalities, stories, motivation and backstories.

A simple meal made well is worth it's weight in gold and is far better than an extravagant meal made poorly.

Edit 2: And unfortunately, this is shaping up to be a simple meal that a man accidentally burnt because he was too busy looking at what the other chefs were cooking to be able to pay attention to his own meal and is only now discovering salt bae and thinking that he can sprinkle some salt off his elbow unto his burnt ass grilled cheese and fool people into it being a fine meal.

 

[Dwarfy2k]

I knew as soon as they wrote about the lower class they were gonna go the "MC will for stupid reasons get sent to the lowest class" Why does this series get serialised when it's so cookie cutter it's beyond boring and poorly written.