Senpai! Let's Have an Office Romance ♪ - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Case - 1

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The panels don't flow well feels forced and janky
 
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felt kinda messy for me too, i dont rly get much from this chapter

Does that girl want to experience "office love" that's why she is attacking senpai? Did she know him before, can anyone explain, im mega confused after reading it
 
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could use some serious proofreading, even the artist and author names aren't romanized
 
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Proofreading isn't going to save this mess. Many of the lines are just outright wrong.
 
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thanks? i mean thanks to you i discovered this but by a miracle was able to understand it. Thanks nonetheless
 
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I think this is one of those situations where the series itself being a mess, and the TL being a mess conspired together to create an even bigger mess.
 
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MC is kind of a chicken... if he's that worried about it he should talk it out with her
 
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Ok, so give me one good reason for her actions,
no development as far as the first chapter goes
its just full on tease no proper action.
"its going to be one of those ones huh."
 
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.....i have dont have clue of what is happening. Either the plot sucks or the tl is a mess. Or both. Can someone look at the raws and give us a description
 
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Are you sure he is an adult? Because he acts more like a highscool boy.
 

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