Look, I know we shouldn't complain about translations like these, I mean they're free after all, but this needs some solid proof reading. This isn't just about spelling mistakes and weird lines like "I am the greatest person", there is no fluidity in the conversation and there is no personality in the way the characters speak.
I appreciate the effort but considering you guys have a Patreon maybe you should try finding some people to help you out because this is beyond rough.