Sesame Salt and Pudding - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - Chapter 2

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In comparison to the first chapter panels seems disjointed, like you dont know if the last scene is continued or it is a completely new one.

Also her reactions now are so strange, at the first chapter she didn't have this reservation towards him and about living together. Combine these problems and you have a really weird experience. Or maybe I am wrong anyway thank you for translation!
 
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@Icreylia Yay, that makes me so happy!

@AngryFerret No problem!

And yeah, I hear you. I thought between the three days it was hard to tell what was happening (that's why I added "the next morning") to one of the panels... thought it might help). I also think this chapter's pacing was a bit accelerated, but personally believe the next chapters aren't bad with that.

As for her reactions, I think if she was actually completely weirded out she would've kicked him out. Calling him a perv and whatnot is meant to be humorous more than anything else. However, that joke isn't as frequent in later chapters. Hope this clarifies things a bit :)
 
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Ooh 42 is a bit...much. That's a whole 20 year age gap. I think it'd be a little less weird if she were older. Like a 33 year old and a 53 year old is still 20 years, but it's less squicky
 
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woah haha he found out so fast but im glad its not one of those things that drags out.... i hope.... at least if they dont talk themselves out of this lol
 
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22 and 42, wow. That's... well, they're both adults, although Nagato is way more acting up to his age.

They're uncle and niece as a cover up story, but if it gets out... why am I hearing banjo? :dogkek:

Planning a date right after being married, although it's just on paper and she isn't romantically interested, yet... this gonna be fu~~ they were found out. That was quick lol

Thanks for scanlation!
 

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