Shall We Go Surfing? - Vol. 1 Ch. 4 - End

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Aw man, so cute, too short. I wish the author would have continued with it u_u Even so, still good ♥♥
 
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I feel like the protagonist's personality did a 180° turn right at the end there, for the sake of a quick wrap-up. Like, where did the all-out puppy-dog attack come from?

I mean, it's not so bad that it bothers me, I guess, just seems kind of like a lazy throw-in-the-towel move to glide past all the awkward progression that should have been there.
 
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Thank you, CatsCats!! 😍 for all your hard work. I really enjoy this fluffy(?) ride! 😆 It's too short, though. But maybe it's so goos because it's short? Making it more precious, I think. 😊 Thanks again, guys! 😘❤
 

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