Shark Maid on the Shore - Vol. 1 Ch. 3.1 - The feelings of humans and mermaids
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The 3.1 chapter wasn't complete so I thought I should do it. This translation is done using chatgpt. If it's readable and you want me to continue it, please say so, or else I won't continue it. Thanks for reading.
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Thank you for the translation!
Please continue. If you took time to make the machine TL actually readable, good for you, because it is... not perfect, but certainly good enough NOT to be glaringly machine translation.
As a former typesetter myself, I'd suggest using a different font (serif fonts don't look good on comics), but otherwise the typesetting is not too bad - you avoided a lot of the usual beguinner's mistakes. Good work on that, too. If anything, I only would advice you to try to force the text (with manual linebreaks if needed) to follow shape of the speech ballons, like page 14 panel 2, and unlike last ballon of page 13.
So, please continue.
As a former typesetter myself, I'd suggest using a different font (serif fonts don't look good on comics), but otherwise the typesetting is not too bad - you avoided a lot of the usual beguinner's mistakes. Good work on that, too. If anything, I only would advice you to try to force the text (with manual linebreaks if needed) to follow shape of the speech ballons, like page 14 panel 2, and unlike last ballon of page 13.
So, please continue.
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