Shati to Renkinjutsu no Machi - Ch. 1.2 - Chapter 1.2

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This is the most potential I've seen in a crafting story so far, but the TL isn't up to snuff for it. If they get more complicated than this, you'll run into quality troubles. Listen to alchemist-sensei!
 
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this looks promising

fantasy is fantasy, it is made up
one can make it as creative as they want
but fantasy needs a set of ground rule to be presented and followed
rules which I found to be missing in so many fantasy stories with their 'create-anything-out-of-nothing' magic
 
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Very charming and cute! I wish a lot of success for this series.
As some people said, the translation needs revision, you need hand with proofreading, you said cotton spiders and then they were water spiders weak to water? that was so confusing, and the old man with the client were communicating with street slang but then not anymore, I can get the gist of it if I think hard enough, but it is concerning.
 

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