Thanks for the chapter!
Typos & edit suggestions:
@Syapaaye
PS: Qualia the Purple is indeed awesome <3.
Thank you so very much! God, I do need a QC more than anything, indeed.
Some things I'd like to explain:
p34 & p62 locked chain -> [maybe this is supposed to mean "(time) loop"?].
I interpret 閉じた円環 as "unchanging result/end". In this context, that can mean time loop indeed, but I feel like it is emphasizing more to the fact that she keeps getting executed no matter what she's tried.
Which now that I think about it, "sealed fate" should suffice in explaining that.
p61 are caused by woman -> are caused by a woman
The author (and by proxy the witch) is intentionally hiding the fact that there are multiple women causing her predicament, which is why there's this "aha! fuck!" moment when Marie is recalling what the witch said. which I did try to follow suit, but poorly. I mean, I did already state "troubles with women". I am tempted to change this to "womanly troubles" and the p61 monologue to be "are caused by some woman" but I don't know if this is closer to the author's original intention.