Shi ni Modori Oujo wa Ikinobiru Tameni Yuri Harem wo Tsukuru Koto ni Shita - Ch. 1 - I've Gone and Done It

Member
Joined
Oct 20, 2018
Messages
8
It's actually impressive how garbage this manga is. Even more so considering it's only the first chapter.
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Jan 30, 2018
Messages
7,389
Yuri harem pls be axed!
Btw ppl are complaining about male harem is ew but everyone who is def this one and saying that is good, then he/she got rly big problems with double standards and this story isn't funny nor original.
Oh the irony, a het harem lover hating a yuri harem and saying IS NOT ORIGINAL LMAO the EXQUISITE taste they have! :kek: aren't you busy reading the 500 variation of "I was a loser ugly piece of shit otaku virgin in my previous life but now with my super cheat power of sitting down and playing gatcha games to slave the girls I Will aim for a harem route!" ?

But Aaaaaaaanyway I'm staying until the point she gets to get laid with the executioner and the witch as well, I also think that 1 year is not nearly enough
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Oct 20, 2019
Messages
213
Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @Syapaaye
  • p5 The majesty -> Her majesty
  • p6 all the the annoying -> all the annoying
  • p7 stamped out the faces -> stomped on the faces
  • p10 Emil Tourzel -> [Emil is usually a male name; female versions (from here) include the French Émile and the English Emily.]
  • p11 This me would show such disgrace -> This me would be shown such disgrace // This me would experience such disgrace
  • p12 that little of a predicament -> such a small predicament // such a little predicament
  • p15 and the very same development -> and experienced the very same development
  • p15 the same period -> the same time period
  • p18 I got back here again -> I returned here again
  • p18 The time goes back to one year ago -> Time rewinds to one year ago
  • p20 totally the case of -> totally a case of
  • p22 go back to your family -> return to your families
  • p28 the rumored house to be -> the house rumored to be
  • p28 hiding place -> hideaway // hideout
  • p34 & p61 it is tangled by the karma of troubles with women -> it is entangled with the karma of troubles with women
  • p34 & p62 locked chain -> [maybe this is supposed to mean "(time) loop"?]
  • p34 Irrelevant of the people's anger -> Regardless of the people's anger
  • p36 When my execution was getting carried -> When my execution was carried out
  • p40 if she joined hands with anti-royalist faction -> if she joined hands with the anti-royalist faction
  • p41 I cuckolded her of her lover -> I cuckolded her with her lover
  • p44 what I always thought -> what I've always thought
  • p52 go back to execution route -> go back to the execution route
  • p61 are caused by woman -> are caused by a woman
  • p62 a lot other women -> lots of other women // a lot of other women
PS: Qualia the Purple is indeed awesome <3.
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Feb 20, 2019
Messages
3,887
thanks for the chapter from this epic series, so are they implying that lesbianism could have neutralized Groundhog's Day? I think the concept is soundish she's shallow so those that had some issue with her before were still able to develop a different issue with her based on the superficial changes she was making on earlier loops which still led to her getting the cancellation edge, but this ways she's building a har... a core of devoted supporters that will be able to shield her from these issues and hopefully by keeping her from being to isolated by her... decision making prevent the citizenry from getting to the point where she ends up getting "axed" again. Though I'm hoping there will be a secret witch in the woods romantic path because upon seeing that flower on Reinne's hat I know she'd be down for the gex as well.
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Oct 8, 2018
Messages
1,101
Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @Syapaaye
PS: Qualia the Purple is indeed awesome <3.
Thank you so very much! God, I do need a QC more than anything, indeed.
Some things I'd like to explain:
p34 & p62 locked chain -> [maybe this is supposed to mean "(time) loop"?].
I interpret 閉じた円環 as "unchanging result/end". In this context, that can mean time loop indeed, but I feel like it is emphasizing more to the fact that she keeps getting executed no matter what she's tried.
Which now that I think about it, "sealed fate" should suffice in explaining that.

p61 are caused by woman -> are caused by a woman
The author (and by proxy the witch) is intentionally hiding the fact that there are multiple women causing her predicament, which is why there's this "aha! fuck!" moment when Marie is recalling what the witch said. which I did try to follow suit, but poorly. I mean, I did already state "troubles with women". I am tempted to change this to "womanly troubles" and the p61 monologue to be "are caused by some woman" but I don't know if this is closer to the author's original intention.
 

Users who are viewing this thread

Top