Shi ni Modori Reijou wa, Kanpeki na Shiawase wo Teniireta - Vol. 2 Ch. 3 - What I Wished for in My Seventh Life

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I feel like stories with multiple time loops need way more time to flesh out its plot and characters. There was no way a one shot could it without being rushed and crappy lol

Thanks for translating it anyway! ❤️ it’s good to translate bad stuff if only to expose people to more manga haha
 
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The people in charge are exposed as corrupt and punished? This is a fantasy story. Reading this felt like being told the plot of a series by an excitable child. But the other one shots from other anthologies would tend to be rushed as well. I just don’t get why these time rewind one shots keep hitting wrong.
 
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So...the prince also loved six (presumably) much longer lives? He's earned the right to go insane himself.

Author chose the path of too much sugar gumming up the works. All those empty pages of them declaring eternal love could have been used for, well, just about anything else.
 
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I feel like stories with multiple time loops need way more time to flesh out its plot and characters. There was no way a one shot could it without being rushed and crappy lol

Thanks for translating it anyway! ❤️ it’s good to translate bad stuff if only to expose people to more manga haha
honestly the concept of both main characters reliving every life is cool but the execution of this one was whewww no good
i'd still be pretty interested if this was turned to a proper manga with at least 2 volumes
 

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every new chapter confirms that a time loop / rewind scenario simply does not work as an anthology manga.
while none of the ideas till now were super terrible they all suffered greatly due to the anthology format and ended up being ass.
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very sad.:meguuusad:
 
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Agreed that this is bad, but that's par for the course at this point. I don't know why I'm still reading these chapters when the anthology has been overall badly written. There were one or two that weren't bad, but nothing like the villainess one where they were mostly good. I guess I keep reading for the same reason the team is still translating and keeping the quality of their work consistent despite the source material being ass.
 
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Forgive me for my incorrect opinion, but this one was much better than some of the other previous ones. Not close to the really good ones but I didn't think this was that bad.
Yeah, it's just kinda bland. The prince is just mediocre which makes him better than actively horrible MLs but I've seen stories where the FL just goes full-on mad after going through enough loops. The Crimson Lady and Broken Ring are just way better at this lol, including the FL being pushed to despair.
every new chapter confirms that a time loop / rewind scenario simply does not work as an anthology manga.
while none of the ideas till now were super terrible they all suffered greatly due to the anthology format and ended up being ass.
:aquadrink:

very sad.:meguuusad:
Some of them work! The very first chapter was super strong with a clever twist, but I agree that with this hit rate there aren't enough good stories to carry a multi-volume anthology.
 

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