If someone paid to commission this, they're getting ripped off. Not only is there already a group translating this, they're doing it WAY better. The dialogue in this is so stilted and awkward, when it's making sense at all, and the choice of fonts is hideous. The least you could do is not upload it on mangadex where it gums up the works for people following a better scanlation that's already in progress and miles ahead.
I'm all for someone adopting an abandoned project or redoing an old one that was low-quality, but this ain't it chief.