The premise was kind of interesting, but the execution is just bad. First of there are no real characters here, the only person we know any kind of motivation of is mc. Other than his motivation we dont know much about him as author is trying hard to conceal most other info about him probably trying to go for some payoff later (wont be worth it).
Cartoonish villains check, poorly thought through implications of how the world and powers work also check. Power scaling is poorly explored. Either something is overpowered or not, and some things are just more overpowered.
The visual story telling is unclear and lacking in several places. It also feels very jumpy, the transitions between different story beats and/or action is very sudden and doesn't really flow.
Not recommended unless you are desperate
