Shin Sekai Builders ~Class 24 "Karada" de Ikinokore~

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It has potential but so far with only the single chapter can't really get a handle on the story direction
 
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Ugly people are evil, monsters good (oppressed), humans bad (oppressors). Peasants get help from monsters and see they aren’t all so bad, humans belonging to the kingdom’s military are cartoonishly evil.
 
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Hmm, I really like the concept itself but.....art style is kind of .....unfortunate, and the author has no sense of pacing and the chapters so far introduced the characters in a really bland way. Author also makes the cardinal sin of wasting far too much time early on introducing a antagonist before you even get a good feel of the main characters.

Prognosis: Terminally ill.
 
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A "my entire class is isekai-ed" manga that doesn't immediately start with the main protagonist getting shit-canned by his bully-classmates and kicked out is at least somewhat refreshing. The classmates turning into monsters and partying up with the protagonist to beat up the bad guys is a neat idea. Execution is a bit lackluster, but it can get better over time.
 
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I guess that this manga is based on a novel. Anyone here who knows the novel's plot? I want spoilers.
 
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Ok, the premise of this is extremely interesting and new. I'll bookmark it for now.
 
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The premise was kind of interesting, but the execution is just bad. First of there are no real characters here, the only person we know any kind of motivation of is mc. Other than his motivation we dont know much about him as author is trying hard to conceal most other info about him probably trying to go for some payoff later (wont be worth it).

Cartoonish villains check, poorly thought through implications of how the world and powers work also check. Power scaling is poorly explored. Either something is overpowered or not, and some things are just more overpowered.

The visual story telling is unclear and lacking in several places. It also feels very jumpy, the transitions between different story beats and/or action is very sudden and doesn't really flow.

Not recommended unless you are desperate :aquadrink:
 

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