"Shiryoujutsushi nado Kegarawashii" to Shokei Sareta node, Mazoku ni Tenshin Itashimasu - Vol. 3 Ch. 11.2

[MangaDex]

 

[SPIDERLILYSCANS85]

If anyone likes, they can critize this chapter. Do that, and this chapter will be last they'll ever see. They don't know when someone is new and they say quality is low.

 

[Elhao]

If anyone likes, they can critize this chapter. Do that, and this chapter will be last they'll ever see. They don't know when someone is new and they say quality is low.

I will gladly praise you for the improved font choices compared to 11.1, however saying that the translation is a bit difficult to understand at times and some words and pronouns are definitely incorrect is also fair criticism that has nothing to do with someone being new to scanlating, especially once you ask for money in return.

If that is enough to make you peace out instead of strive to improve, it's a shame, but so be it.

 

[bonkchoy124]

Very wholesome chapter, but the comment above has some good points. There's always room for improvement :]

 

[cryum]

If anyone likes, they can critize this chapter. Do that, and this chapter will be last they'll ever see. They don't know when someone is new and they say quality is low.

Is it criticism if I bring up how you want money sent on binance of all places?

 

[SPIDERLILYSCANS85]

Is it criticism if I bring up how you want money sent on binance of all places?

No love, PayPal isn't available in my country. If you can send to binance

 

[SPIDERLILYSCANS85]

I will gladly praise you for the improved font choices compared to 11.1, however saying that the translation is a bit difficult to understand at times and some words and pronouns are definitely incorrect is also fair criticism that has nothing to do with someone being new to scanlating, especially once you ask for money in return.

If that is enough to make you peace out instead of strive to improve, it's a shame, but so be it.

Well, the Japanese might be hard to understand since that's how it is no matter which app I use so

 

[KitRagnell]

I think you just need another proofreading pass. Like page 6 should be "your execution", not you're (you are).

 

[DaoFox]

If anyone likes, they can critize this chapter. Do that, and this chapter will be last they'll ever see. They don't know when someone is new and they say quality is low.

oh well, easy come, easy go. this isn't an airport, you don't need to announce your departure when you leave btw.

if the first thing you do after showing up out of nowhere is pass off others work as your own and complain about justified criticism while asking for people to send you money, don't be surprised that people don't bend over backwards to keep you around.

while this is a community that is grateful for the people who share their work, it's not a group of beggers.

If you are so new to this that you can't take a little criticism, don't post it. if you can't reach the minimum standard of quality that leaves little open to criticism, don't ask for money for it.

 

[Angeline134]

Quick grammatical corrections: page 5 add "if" or "when" after "Rachel, even" it helps make the sentence flow more smoothly, I agree with KitRagnell on page 6, for page 7 I would either add "and" to "the saint predicted the resurrection of the demon king sent those soldiers" making it "predicted the resurrection of the demon king and sent those soldiers" or change "predicted" to "predicting" making it "the saint, predicting the resurrection of the demon king, sent those soldiers". Other than those three, the translation is quite good keep up the good work.

 

[DiscountJoJo]

The insecurity in that comment is palpable. Fair critique is how one improves, assuming, that is, that the one being critiqued knows its not a personal attack on them.

 

[TheEnd478]

Wait till FMC finds out the stupid reasoning of the Saintess

And well,

Spoiler: The VERY Stupidty that lead to FMC death in the first place

Was a FUCKING accident on Saintess part because SHE WAS UNAWARE FMC WAS NEEDED TO REVIVE THE DEMON KING! Meaning she sabotaged her own plan! Not that it was a great plan to begin with! I just LOVE how the Simp Prince is unaware "he was a stepping stone" for the Demon King! Bitch ACTUALLY treated him like a "Borrow without permission first" that she'll just "hand back to the FMC when she gets the Demon King" and funny enough all she got out of it was BRINGING FMC AND DEMON KING TOGETHER AND BRINGING A FATE WORSE THEN DEATH ON HERSELF! As FMC turns her and the prince along with MANY OTHERS into "zombies that CAN feel pain and WON'T lose sense of self, she plans to TORTURE for all eternity! Talk about "never forgiving" LOL!

 

[weirdblackcat]

If anyone likes, they can critize this chapter. Do that, and this chapter will be last they'll ever see. They don't know when someone is new and they say quality is low.

font is definite improvement.

 

[TinsleyNocturnal]

Dude! Great improvement! Thanks!

 

[Coldstar12]

If anyone likes, they can critize this chapter. Do that, and this chapter will be last they'll ever see. They don't know when someone is new and they say quality is low.

This is certainly an improvement ill give you that. needs more proof reading

 

[WatermelonPlease]

Aaaah every chapter is great