Shitsurenshita node Vtuber Hajimetara Toshiue no Onee-san ni Motemashita - Vol. 4 Ch. 21

[MangaDex]

 

[Geejin]

man does NOT look 40, 18 max

 

[Brobobo]

Incoming accidental career reveal to papa

 

[erellisae]

'everything is properly cleaned'

your first page has text going out of textboxes and over art, never mind all the bubbles that aren't cleaned at all throughout the chapter

'typesetting is legible'

our feel
ings became in
tertwined

look at page 5 on a phone and tell me you can read that. count how many times the font size changes. c'mon dude

'everything is proofread'

first subject error is on page 4 and that good 'ol MTL stiffness throughout:
'the senpai now has a totally different vibe from school' -> 'you've got a totally different vibe from school, senpai'
'the money earned at the comiket' -> 'the money you earned at comiket'
these aren't robots they're young adults who should be speaking like actual people

'if you don't want to read it, don't click it'

This is the shittiest thing to say, straight up. We've been seeing MTL groups crowd out actual translators who give a shit for the last year. There's a ton of cases of hard-working groups getting sniped by speedsubs and giving up because what's the point at that point? Saying 'if you don't like it just read it' is ignoring an obvious, clear pattern and driving the quality of translations to the bottom of the barrel. You're the one putting your AI's work out here and presenting it for other people to read as if you're proud of it, while sniping a group out the way. you should expect to receive feedback when that work has clear problems.

 

[AnonymousContributor]

shining schwarz
wears all white

bro should be shining weiss

 

[Jack4Hire]

Dude uses a shitty ai to translate a chapter, posts it without proofreading it a single fucking time apparently, or even worse, doesn't see a problem with the result, and then he posts this piece of garbage and holds a 'mightier than thou' attitude when people rightfully call out his shit translation.

 

[saredesu]

as much as I want to join the mtl hate, the original group is 20 chapters behind the latest one, this comiket arc has been hanging forever... so if they could hurry up to make up for that....

also the translation didn't give me brain aneurysm and the pages aren't scuffed like fried meme like most snipes do.

I'm all for human handwork but blueballin is not good either....

 

[CPhant0m]

(honestly don't care if it's poorly translated, just make it make sense)
Anyways Story Wise:
Father (that looks hella young) finds out SonDaughter is a VTuber
(Imma make a guess: After Father finds out, Yuki/Yuka gets revealed as the Child of Schwarz Online. It either happens next chapter or later in the manga... or just never does idk)

 

[Zaxoraz]

wow, THat is fast, didn't expect the manga to reach the schwarz already....

 

[Excel-01]

as much as I want to join the mtl hate, the original group is 20 chapters behind the latest one, this comiket arc has been hanging forever... so if they could hurry up to make up for that....

also the translation didn't give me brain aneurysm and the pages aren't scuffed like fried meme like most snipes do.

I'm all for human handwork but blueballin is not good either....

Yeah we're pretty behind the schedule here, also he's translated this with AI just to read it himself anyways so eh at least he put "some" effort to share this lmao.

 

[Flyingpantsu]

I never knew it was possible to combine shota and dilf. A whole new world has just opened to me!

 

[vcnomnom]

you should change the model, this one suck, english is prob not your 1st lang but you should know what a decent read is, not this one.