I mean I was reading through the other chapters and you seem to have actually bothered to QC chapter 18 a bit? At least until you hit that disastrous page 22 where all the text just mashes over the art without any cleaning or redrawing whatsoever, it's not-- bad. It's incredibly stiff and poorly written, like all MTL translations, and it's obviously a really shitty thing to do to snipe a series whose last release was 2 weeks ago, but at least the translation isn't clearly incorrect.
But you seem to have just given up here right from page 1. It's riddled with errors, nonsensical thought bubbles that don't scan when you read them together, the subjects and contexts of what people are saying are all missing. It's genuinely gone downhill.
Hell, you even apparently QCd 19 but it's straight up missing pages and your credits page comes before the actual end of the chapter??