Shoujo Kageki Revue Starlight - My Heart Was Enchanted By Your Love (Doujinshi)

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So this isn't a huge deal, but it is a curious detail.

In all of these oneshots, Maya Tendo seems to have a penis.

I mean some women have them, whether trans or intersex, or futa/Omegaverse or what have you if we're using online erotica tropes.

So I feel like the tags, or the description, or the title may have benefited from referencing that fact. It'd help people looking for that sort of thing find it, and those not interested to know not to bother.

The bit that sticks out to me though, is the fact that the tropes, style of writing, the choreography as it were, dialogue, all of those details seem to be pulling less from erotica of women-with-penises, and more Heterosexual porn, it's a vibe kinda thing.

Which makes this a very disorienting read. If not for the tits on Maya, I'd consider this thematically to be a rule-63 dude version of her banging Claudine, because that's kind of the energy brought across.

I dunno, seems like this was maybe a group project that was either ill-concieved or poorly executed, depending on what they were actually trying to do.
 

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