Shoutai Fumei to Kyoufu - Ch. 1 - Unknown Identity and Fear

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If its a Wig, then its a twist but yeah its the Teacher but I guess she is just stirring things up for his Highschool life to be more interesting, unless she really like him.
 
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I think that's a wig with the mask. I am getting bokuben vibes from this. It's interesting. I wish they would've scarred him up more but shrug. Anyways nothing says "I love you" like some good ol PTSD.
 
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The scar is too minor for it to be a big deal and it's gonna be really hard to buy the premise cause of it. His design should have a much much more prominent one, long and actually a little disfiguring and scary.
 
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This is the same author as Idol to Otaku no Risou no Kankei?! Well this is going to be a fun ride. Thanks for the TL, looking forward for more.
 
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Fly's not drawing the MMC with a suitable scar is one problem. Another is that, in an attempt to hook the reader, the chapter delivers events out of chronologic order, but the real effect was just to make the story seem incoherent (rather than mysterious) for a time.
 
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Let me in on the betting race too. It's obvious the girl with the face mask. She show her mouth because he never did see it during normal conversation.
 

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