Shura Youjo no Eiyuutan ~Hanpa-sha to Iwa Reta Youhei, Youjo ni Tensei Shite Nariagaru~ - Vol. 3 Ch. 11

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OMG!!! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! This is one of the most promising new manga i've read so far! THANK YOU!!!!
 
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Sorry guy this my first time translate Japanese manga I will fix it when I upload next chapter
Give it a couple proofreading passes. Most of us don't need a god-tier translation, but you should at least make sure that the main character's name is spelled consistently. Thanks for the translation, looking forward to seeing you improve!
 
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thank you for picking this up, but yeah this was rough to be honest. but i believe in you to improve as you go
 
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Better call Saul :haa:

Sorry but the translation quality needs improvement. Too many basic errors like name inconsistency, and the conversations don't make sense.
I think ‘Shura’ is supposed to be Asura, since Sol said that was the title he used in his previous life. Which in the first chapter was ‘God of War,’ and Asuras in Buddist mythology are beings that are constantly at war with Devas.
 
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Even AI tools these days often have terms you can add, there is no reason why name should be spelled in t different ways in a single chapter
 
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I don't expect every word to be scrutinised, but...yeah, making sure there are actual sentences and characters' names/pronouns are consistent would be the bare minimum.
 
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At long last, this thing awakens from its slumber. The chapter was amazing. But yeah, just like others said, it needs proofreading, since it has inconsistencies in the characters' names.

Also, all the best :thumbsup:
 

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