Shuumatsu no Fukushuu Daikou-ya - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - The girl who took the life of a loved one 1

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The website that hosts the manga lists each actual chapter as 2 separate chapters, which gets really confusing 💀 I've combined chapter 1 and 2, which were already on here, into the first chapter. As chapter 4 wouldn't have released anyway yet, the new chapter 2 will release later, combining the old 3 and 4. Then, chapters will be uploaded as intended. This will mean it will take longer for releases though!
 
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what's this .. it feels like random jumbled ideas being forced to the reader, instead of trying to make reader invested first, the entire info is being dumped at the front, the dialogue also feels super artificial, preventing the reader to even form a basic suspension of disbelief.
 

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