Shuumatsu no Hanayome-sama ~sweet home†melty life~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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I don't remember following this manga for it to be popping up in my updates, but I'm glad I apparently did. Occasional rough grammar and spelling aside, this looks really interesting.
 
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Well, this is somehow original and the chapter end with a climax, and is not another anthology but a story with onee-shota theme. Follow. <3

Oh, and thank for the translation. :)
 
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Thanks for the TL but please upscale and do noise reduction on the pages. Either use photoshop or something like waifu2x: https://waifu2x.udp.jp/. You can select the entire folder so it upscales all pages. Also get a proof reader (out a comment on the next chapter or edit this requesting one, you can add it as the first or last page). You can also try using chatgpt is you cant find a native english proofreader. I suggest changing fonts top here's a guide with downloadable fonts. https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/type/fonts.html
 
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When I first read it: oh looks like some new general wholesome manga

When I finish ch1: holy sh*ttt
 
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was about to give it a try but it gave me the feeling of "entenity"

so i guess i'll wait for actual tl
 
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a salaryman getting bullied and abused because his mother is a cult believer?
kind of don't fit the narrative
I said back-story, as in this would be his childhood, and now he's a working adult.

It would work even better, because he'd be suffering for longer and in different ways than just bullying. The angel would have more time to fall in "love" with him in her yandere way, making the destruction of mankind make more sense from her point of view
 
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As a black company worker yourself, too bad you can't relate and imagining yourself as the MC because he's a shota huh. Ew
Tf? I'm not trying to relate, and why are you assuming I'm a black company worker? I just don't want to see a grow woman creaming herself for a kid, not because I'm jealous but because I find it gross.

I honestly believe it would make the story better. What would a pre-pubescent know about the significance of love, marriage, and the destruction of an entire city
 
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I said back-story, as in this would be his childhood, and now he's a working adult.

It would work even better, because he'd be suffering for longer and in different ways than just bullying. The angel would have more time to fall in "love" with him in her yandere way, making the destruction of mankind make more sense from her point of view
but I think it needs to be a fairly recent event (which gives deep depression or traumatic story)
so that it can give more impact feeling when the angel is finally introduced to give him "salvation"

if he can cope up with a long suffering and still be a working adult, I think that it would be much more logical that he is the one becoming evil and wipe out the humanity when he finally snaps,
and then maybe we get a sexy demon onee-san instead of angel

I guess the middle ground is it will be better if he is in high school or a neet dropout
 
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Tf? I'm not trying to relate, and why are you assuming I'm a black company worker? I just don't want to see a grow woman creaming herself for a kid, not because I'm jealous but because I find it gross.

I honestly believe it would make the story better. What would a pre-pubescent know about the significance of love, marriage, and the destruction of an entire city
But the workflow for Manga artist is to decide the fetish first then build a story around it.
 

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