Wow, knew it was bad, didn't know it was this bad, the story is so all over the place and chapter ending statements 90% of the time don't come true, the little brother main character was so sidelined, he honestly just didn't matter, main guy was so devoted to his sole love they had to clone him to get him with anyone else (his nurse and the princess, namely, also, whose personality was with the princess clone? it doesn't make any sense), and the main antagonist girl made a point of him having sex, not main him, but, he doesn't care? He only cares for his sole partner, which, big surprise, she notices the clone and they don't have sex, and the american girl at the end made a chapter ending statement to want a child, to then, big surprise, be denied it, and the little brother step sister thing went nowhere (at the very end it did show them growing closer, her moving on from her past crush and towards him, but like, that's it?)
There could've been so much drama, like the main guy was literally trying to have his little sister have sex with his friend but that never went through, I thought the main antagonist girl was going to be raped after they introduced that she's never had sex and the american girl was set up to be raped, but no, the cult did also rape the guy, and the second main guy got tied up in the storage room, but that was with a main girl, not some bystander, it builds up numbers of thousands of people, but it never feels like there's more than the main cast, it feels empty
There's so many just weird things, like when he's told his partner is dead, he believes them? Really? The princess has sex with a clone of him? The virus conveniently mutates at the end so they have to gather computing resources or something, the literal super cliche 'Which one of you is the real one', when it's beyond obvious who is, and beyond worthless to ask, the island is set to EXPLODE? The weird cult thing too, having a real god possessing?
I'm just completely whiplashed by how lackluster it was, the romance is so predictable, main cast grow together, and anyone who is quickly introduced is quickly removed, it could have been very crushing that she allows him to have sex but neither wants to, so the sex is completely bitter feeling, and he's thrown into a depressive slump, trying to spend as much time he can with his partner, to try and become ignorant to his set path/duties, or him changing to be accepting of others but only if they're properly intimate, not just for pleasure, which, most sex felt devoid of any emotions beyond pleasure, even when the main got together, it didn't feel touching at all
It's disappointing, it feels like the premise was forgotten and nothing big happens, nothing goes anywhere, there's jealousy, goes nowhere, cult, goes nowhere, virus mutates, goes nowhere, princess wants to marry, goes nowhere, they find the cure, and save with world, main couple get together, the end, but dragged on by introducing random plotlines like those that go nowhere
Talking about both stories, the main and after btw
Shoutout that bear randomly showing up in the early chapters
Art carries heavy