Sidooh - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Hunger

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You know what would make this chapter actually moving? If the onahole like thing without personality would not scream to scar these two children for life. But no, we couldn't have her acting like a reasonable person just because that would be too clever.
 
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Accurate to that time period seems good so far although the one thing i didn't expect was a gremlin appearing and stabbing her in the head. Mostly because knifes don't go through a skull that easily you would need to hammer it in or hit it with extreme force and all that for nothing. Well at least they killed the prick.
 

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