Christ, that red braid is almost as bad as the shitty CGI they think they're actually getting away with but is actually so bad people hate it even when they think they don't. Add to it the general linework around the effects and the anatomy and this is basically just a high schooler's art project now.
The art makes me laugh so much lmao....but the story is too cool and good to be dropped
But really....let's talk about that braid on page 4.....like, author, what is that? hahahahahahaha