Someone Hertz - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - On-Air Name: Eel Potato

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This is cute. I’m not sure how long it can last with the premise being so unconnected. But I’ve seen weaker plots last ages. Hopefully it stays fun throughout.
 
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Very cute, but it kinda is a one and done oneshot in the first chapter.
I don't really see how it can be continued from this, though
 
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I think the problem with this is how hard it is to sell someone being funny. Like apparently this girl is his idol someone so unbelievably funny that some people think she was an up and coming comedian but like...
Lets be real, shes not any funnier than the average user you chat with on the internet. Its easier to seel immensely smart and physically gifted than something as subjective as this. And maybe its the translation runing it but i doubt this could be that much funnier in the original text.

Aside from that, the interactions themself are entertaining and believable enough and the story flows well.
The bit in the diner where she goes "this is where hard working dedicated types vompete with prodihies" is kinda weird and its hard to get a read on the fmc in general but im willing to give this a cpuple more chapters
 
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Absolutely nothing was funny to me... I guess this type of comedy isn't my style at all.
 

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