Sonna Kazoku nara Sutechaeba? - Vol. 5 Ch. 33

[MangaDex]

 

[Thyme.Minister]

not bad, some small grammar weirdness in a couple pages, but I appreciate the translations! Keep em coming, if you are able.

 

[Asaroki]

Good attempt. Only issue I had was the credits page was extremely hard to parse. Otherwise, the translation is adequate and, like many things, it can overall improve with practice. Keep translating if you're motivated to do so.

I know I want to see how this all ends.

 

[Mangamoz]

What the holy fuck is going on vol 13 that there is some dude going super saiyan?

 

[2adrenaline]

not bad, some small grammar weirdness in a couple pages, but I appreciate the translations! Keep em coming, if you are able.

I would appreciate it if you could tell me where, to improve in the next chapter.

 

[GG334]

i forgot what was going on tbh

 

[Thyme.Minister]

I would appreciate it if you could tell me where, to improve in the next chapter.

page 8- "I already an excuse"
page 13- "They didn't that coming" and "and it was Ichika-san decision"
page 14- "your family haven't talked about this?"
page 17- "the bell hasn't ring yet?"

these are very slight errors but overall, I understood the context of the events, so its still impressive

 

[azudai96]

What the holy fuck is going on vol 13 that there is some dude going super saiyan?

 

[azudai96]

"I already an excuse"

Made me laugh hard enough, the teacher is already an excuse.

Sometimes unintentional comedy is the best.

 

[2adrenaline]

page 8- "I already an excuse"
page 13- "They didn't that coming" and "and it was Ichika-san decision"
page 14- "your family haven't talked about this?"
page 17- "the bell hasn't ring yet?"

these are very slight errors but overall, I understood the context of the events, so its still impressive

thank you so much, I fixed what you pointed out

 

[caliche9700]

The translation is a lil rough but thanks for picking this manga.

 

[ciera]

Thanks for the release

 

[LilHoodie]

This man DESERVED to be slapped. Come on my guy, do it

 

[bejad007]

so this is what happened to Emiya Kiritsugu before Fate Zero

 

[RedFlash95]

I'm glad someone picked this up

 

[Sunji27]

Can someone please beat the shiiiii up of that teacher





Thank you for the upload

 

[silverpetricof]

The translation is spotty in some areas, but not to the point of it being incomprehensible. And after not getting updated for 8 months, I'll take something that's pretty inoffensively readable.

Thank you for the translation.

 

[crossface]

I would appreciate it if you could tell me where, to improve in the next chapter.

This is a good first try, and thanks for picking up the series. Are you ESL perchance?

Here's a few places I noticed personally:
Page 4
-the text in the 3rd panel is a bit hard to distinguish so you might want to use a thicker font on these sort of panels or use something with a thicker outline
-"Ichika told her she was treating her as a criminal" this sentence doesn't make any sense
Page 6
-The flow of the 2nd and 3rd panels feel stilted and might be too literally translated without accounting for phonetic changes between JP and EN
-text sizing might need adjustment so you don't have overhang on the page border like in the 2nd panel
Page 7
-same issue in the 3rd panel as the note from Page 4
-when you have a word break off or roll to the next line you need to punctuate it like "undoub-
tedly" it needs to be hyphenated
Page 8
-"they must have came to complain..." this is the wrong tense
-the phonetics of the past 2 bubbles feels off and don't flow exactly
Page 9
-again the phonetically this Page feels stilted
Page 10
-same hyphenation note from Page 4
-"no no it wasn't a fraud..." again phonetics just are off
Page 11
-"my daughter was hurt by being called a criminal" phonetically it's fine but just feels stilted, honestly might just be a me issue
Page 12
-same font size and hyphenation notes as previously mentioned
-"they made Ichika-can.." should be Ichika-chan
-same font note from Page 4 on the 3rd panel
Page 13
-"they didn't saw this coming" the tense here is wrong
-see you got the hyphenation right here
-"but after talking to me..." this bubble feels wrong phonetically
Page 14
-"can't you accept..." needs to be Ichika-san's
Page 17
-"can not" you could just contract this into can't
Page 20
-same font note from Page 4 on the 2nd panel
Page 21
-you could insert a "the" before "Imai's" and it'd work better

That's everything I personally noticed. I'm just doing this as a one off to try and give some notes so hopefully you see this comment. Lot of the issues I noticed are common with people who aren't native English speakers but do speak ESL which is why I asked. If so this is a very good effort and I hope you can improve going forward.

 

[untruc]

It’s not often that this manga makes me happy with what I read, but this time it did: the teacher is a dick, the dad is really trying his best to be a good father, and there’s a real confrontation between the two. That feels right. Then again, maybe it’s just because the mom wasn’t there (and it looks like she’ll show up in the next chapter)

 

[Laxtir]

Thanks, i been soo into this since like chapter 10, and makes me happy that somebody pick it up