Sora no Aosa o Shiru Hito yo - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - motives.

[MangaDex]

 

[DirkHardpeck]

That proofreading was really, really bad.

 

[Hachi015]

Maybe he wants people to read his tl works in the patreon rather than here thus why the quality is so low on these updates

 

[Lymus]

@FragorCherison please do not add groups that did not work on chapters

 

[FragorCherison]

@Lymus Sorry I don't really understand what you meant. Could you explain yourself? Thanks.

 

[Tamerlane]

A few issues:
1. Page 3 and Page 4 are the same
2. Page 65 (14) should stay "I refuse to join."
3. The first word after an ellipsis should be capitalized
4. There's some errors in clauses. For instance, page 88 shouldn't have a comma because they're not independent of one another
5. Can you translate the lyrics as well? If they're not gibberish, I'd like to see what they actually say, and then you can put the Japanese on a sidenote or something.

 

[FragorCherison]

Sorry for the bad quality everyone, I'll make sure to correct it. Thank you @Tamerlane for the constructive advise, will take note of it.