Sotsugyou Arubamu no Kanojotachi - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

[martianpaws]

At least he's not a total generic harem protag, only 90% generic.

Not much but it's something.

Just like me

 

[r1astrad]

Ch1P32 and Ch2P14 you use female pronouns for the protagonist.

 

[News13]

Ch1P32 and Ch2P14 you use female pronouns for the protagonist.

Thank you very much for notifying the error, the one in chapter 1 has been fixed, but checking the second error that is on page 14 of chapter 2 we didn't see it, if you refer to the phrase: I'm her sex friend. the one who says it is the girl, Ootsuka.

 

[PreStoneX]

hello, here we are again with chapter number 2, I hope you like it and continue supporting the series, as soon as volume 1 comes out in digital I will make a reedition of the series, the quality of the images is lamentable

I commented on the other chapter, but I'll comment here again, some thorough proofreading is definitely needed, especially with pronouns xD Like when the girl talking about the guy, yet says "I'm HER sex friend"

Edit: I noticed you already know about it, but yeah, these are not the only issues. Chapter 1 still has pronoun mistakes.

 

[r1astrad]

Thank you very much for notifying the error, the one in chapter 1 has been fixed, but checking the second error that is on page 14 of chapter 2 we didn't see it, if you refer to the phrase: I'm her sex friend. the one who says it is the girl, Ootsuka.

Unless there's something I don't understand in the RAW that I don't have. The panel should read:

Ootsuka Sora says, "I'm his sex friend."​

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In English the pronoun "I" establishes self (Ootsuka) as a subject and then you would use the pronoun "his" (Kanae) to establish ownership of the status of "sex friend".

 

[ComradeVee]

wow, any interest I had in this has just plunged, just another vapid series with nothing going for it

thanks for the work, scanlators - but make sure to fix those pronoun references.

 

[Glipmine]

I like how this is Universitichigo 100%

Wow, I can't wait for the girl I'm rooting for to lose again

 

[News13]

Unless there's something I don't understand in the RAW that I don't have. The panel should read:

Ootsuka Sora says, "I'm his sex friend."​

​

In English the pronoun "I" establishes self (Ootsuka) as a subject and then you would use the pronoun "his" (Kanae) to establish ownership of the status of "sex friend".

Ooh ok, I didn't see it that way, we'll fix it 🫡

 

[News13]

I commented on the other chapter, but I'll comment here again, some thorough proofreading is definitely needed, especially with pronouns xD Like when the girl talking about the guy, yet says "I'm HER sex friend"

Edit: I noticed you already know about it, but yeah, these are not the only issues. Chapter 1 still has pronoun mistakes.

Ooh okey, could you notify me of the errors so I can fix it as soon as possible if it's not too much trouble ?

 

[Bumpf]

okay consider this polyamory okay do you get it it would be really cool and awesome if they did the polyamory thing because tis awesome yknow like kanojo mo kanojo which is awesome yknow

 

[Swegcat]

Unexpected rizz from MC

 

[tuxxyinblue]

I usally skip over harem stories but ngl this one looks pretty good

 

[AAA1]

author need to tone down a bit with the dialogues. it's too much. one character doesn't really need to be introduced in only one chapter. what appeal to the people who likes reading harem story is how the plot moves bit by bit. don't overstretch with useless thought like mc's own thinking in kanokari. but use the more wide panelling, a good on view scene, mysteries of the characters, and the way of the mc develop the stories for later. no need to be afraid if it will not appeal to the reader

 

[AkaFushichou]

Fun fact that I haven't seen anyone mention - the girls' names are puns in Japanese based on where MC met them.
Onomine Koyuki (小野峰　小雪) -> Grade school (小学校)
Muranaka Manaka (村中　愛中) -> Middle school (中学校)
Takase Takaho (高瀬　高穂) -> High school (高校)
Ootsuka Sora (大塚　大空) -> College (大学)

 

[Karikko]

Lmao, it's one thing if only the club prez, but to think Manaka joined the fun too in makng this an "animal video"

 

[BadHaremSchollar]

There is an error on page 2.

Takaho should be labeled as "high school friend" and Manaka as "girl i admired on middle school"

 

[Nehona]

This is so generic and uninspired...
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I'm still going to read it, the girls are cute. XD

 

[ia_zero]

Makes sense. The only way to defeat cool girl is to become even cooler dude. The math checks out.

 

[Peksman]

another generic harem romcom sigh
added to reading list
lets hope this one doesnt turn into a certain rental

Bruh, idk why that piece of garbage is still ongoing. I literally just peeked on the few pages of the latest chapter, I yeeted coz of his patheticness. Can't stand it smh.

 

[chilneun]

this is good instant noodles