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YyAoMmIi Group Leader Joined May 23, 2018 Messages 275 Mar 29, 2024 #2 Thanks What if MC resisted it simply because he has no magic? And it targeted everyone else for their magic.
Thanks What if MC resisted it simply because he has no magic? And it targeted everyone else for their magic.
Cidolfas Dex-chan lover Joined Sep 3, 2018 Messages 273 Mar 29, 2024 #3 Thanks for the chapter! The whole scene with Marelle was great 10/10
Giguv Dex-chan lover Joined Jan 18, 2018 Messages 161 Mar 30, 2024 #5 The characters fighting against the time skip is a really interesting concept :3
MopPhantom Dex-chan lover Joined Aug 12, 2023 Messages 51 Mar 31, 2024 #6 This is great but there is way too much dialogue. I think you could definitely do amore with less and lean on your art for great visual storytelling
This is great but there is way too much dialogue. I think you could definitely do amore with less and lean on your art for great visual storytelling
E Encyclopedium Dex-chan lover Joined Apr 6, 2020 Messages 778 Apr 18, 2024 #7 Hmmm. A plot is a foot and I love Marielle her facial expressions are always great