Stepmother's Friends - Ch. 48

[MangaDex]

 

[b4nji]

Thanks for the chapter, you're doing good. Keep it up.

And can we move on already? This threesome's been going on for like 8 chapters my god

 

[kuji-manga]

Thanks for the chapter!!

 

[Lifeonmars]

Tnx VM

 

[Asynchria]

Thank you for the chapter! Here's some critiquing from me:

On page 1, "A men like Seokwoo..." it should be "man" instead of "men". Man is singular (one male). Men is plural (two or more males).

"Dick" is more polite than "cock", but in the middle of sex usually politeness goes out the window, depending on the person's personality. So "cock" should be fine in what's going on now, unless it's a shy timid girl who wouldn't be used to saying it, in which case "dick" would be used.

Also... the very first sentence on the first page "Even when you do it with other women, I'll show you that I'm better than him...!" the 'him' there is confusing to me. She's talking to Seokwoo, the guy, but she's saying "I'm better than him"... so it doesn't quite make sense for it to be phrased that way. If she's talking to Seokwoo, then the 'him' should be 'you'. (Though that doesn't make sense itself...) If she's talking to the other girl, then the first part "Even when you do it with other women" doesn't quite fit... so assuming she IS talking to Seokwoo, you'd want to change the 'him' in this to either 'them' or 'her', since I'm guessing she's trying to say that she'd better than the other women that he would be doing it work. (Also, don't put a period at the end of "Even when you do it with other women."...there should be a comma there instead. Periods are used to indicate the end of a sentence, and how it's written there it's not complete.)

Hope this is helpful!

 

[aionw0w]

Thanks for your hard work man. There are some minor mistakes, but nothing that makes it unreadable. Doing this might improve your english so don't give up and keep going!

 

[benmazalan92]

You can learn languages from porn? All I ever learnt is iku iku kimochi and stuffs.

 

[ReverendJ]

@Hezkezl I'm going to have to disagree on the dick versus cock thing. Dick is considered a swear and cock is not so cock is the least abrasive of the two.

 

[ReeeKids]

Aye thanks

 

[Pinealoupe]

Dick v Cock depends on context and the persons personality. Someone who isn't very vulgar may not ever say cock or dick, but that shouldn't apply here. Not sure what you mean by politeness unless it has to do with Korean having an objectively more polite word for penis. In English both Dick and Cock are vulgar words. In my opinion, cock during sex, and dick when not but it really doesn't matter.

 

[Kuda]

Thanks bro, keep it up honestly

 

[Tigero8504]

There are only minor errors in the translation but nothing bad. So far, you are doing a good job and it would be really appreciated if you could continue, and it could help you improve your English skills.

As for the "cock" or "dick" debate, I think the better word to use would be "cock" as that would directly reference someone's penis. On the other hand, "dick" wouldn't as much as the word is very often used as an insult towards somebody, and to me the word sounds a lot more harsh when used. Anyway, that is just my personal opinion so there will be others with other opinions.

 

[BatNova]

The yuri kiss was pretty hot.

 

[ss4chris]

lol Naeyon getting NTr'd again and taking her man back at the same time

 

[Donhbankz]

Keep it up bro the translation mistakes are minor plus English is a very weird language btw I read manwha porn and I read porn manwha is both correct in english

 

[Rellishfan1234]

god, this is the hottest threesome i've seen in a pornhwa

 

[ShionSinX]

Between "gonna" and "going to", they have the same exact meaning, but "gonna" is how you say it casually while "going to" is a correct/formal/polite way to say it, and in any place where you write it (like on an essay) you will use "going to". When just talking its normal to say "gonna", "lemme" (let me), "wanna" (want to) and so on.

 

[Cutelightning]

Your doing great, if you do ever need help with translations, or anything else just reach out for the community here. I know that we all would love to help you. This is a great manhwa keep up your great work and see you on the next chapter.

 

[Neomixer]

Cock sounds harsher than Dick to me, but context matters and it is not a big thing. Don't feel worried, you are doing fine, what matters is that you are trying to improve.

 

[Mrshu]

good work