Stray Bullet Baby

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If it were a little less raunchy it'd be a nice awkward romance, but as it is it feels a bit grimy. Bits of dubious consent, drunken crotch-grabbing, the usual sketchy yaoi stuff (though relatively mild, I suppose), somewhat spoils what otherwise should be a nice non-homogeneous mix of friendliness and grumpiness, in a story with believable and flawed characters, and some other decent elements of writing.
 

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