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@monkey123: I thought it was pretty good when i read it years back. Nothing amazing, but entertaining, and the worldbuilding utilizes a mix of Judeochristian and Sumerian motifs, which is somewhat uncommon.
There is a twist near the end that is kind of abrupt, though.
 
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Not bad, better than i expected at the very least, i just don't get something about the end:
did they merge both worlds or what
 
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At the very least, it looks like they made it pretty easy to travel between them. Raim and Vine were wearing school uniforms, so they were probably visiting the human world for a bit. Maybe the other world is just floating above the human world, or maybe there's more involved.
 
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There is a fair amount to dislike but a lot to love.

Two biggest issues.
1. Story arcs at times feels to compacted and I feel they could've gone on longer.
2. The ending was a bit too rushed for my taste and it also had a good amount of tuff I disliked. I did like the final end though. I just wish the Epilogue wasn't so weird and we got a scene of Pam returning to Earth.



I am not a fan of the fact that her friend is for some weird reason tied to this world and I woudl've rather had it so one day Pan returns to Earth knocking on her friends window when her friend was by herself at night. I'd also love to see people reacting to her suddenly returning . Hell, I think it'd be interesting since both Pam and the friend ( Lover?) Are now godlike beings, I think it'd be interesting seeing them deal with that while hiding it from people on Earth.
 
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I’m a sucker for mythological references and this was pretty chock full of them. I started reading because someone posted in the Dynasty Scans Discord server about it, talking about how it was interesting for being a very early isekai with a tinge of yuri. And yeah, that’s about what it is. I *so* wish it could have gone on longer, so much was compressed and I feel like the author wanted to carry it on further too, but who knows. The ending was confusing, there were too many characters throughout the entire book, but other than that level of compression, it was an enjoyable read. I do wish we got more of the buildup with Pam and Linfa’s relationship though... I’m a yuri fan at heart.
 
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Wow this was pretty amazing! Id think I'll give it a 10/10. The story lost me a couple of times but other than that it's good.
Actually another complaint: way too much mindless unnecessary boner fuel for shitbag incel coomers. Makes a hard to enjoy the story at some points.
Lastly for those of which this applies: yuri yuri yuri yuri yuri :D
 

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