Just a tsundere succubus :sleep:
monkey123 Dex-chan lover Joined May 10, 2018 Messages 11,798 Aug 24, 2024 #21 Just a tsundere succubus
S ShimonScans Group Leader Joined Jan 10, 2023 Messages 1 Aug 27, 2024 #23 AlexEliot said: Mistranslations on P26 and P27. “I love you so much Kiyo-chan” -> “There is no one else for me but you, Kiyo-chan.” And on P27 (the actually significant one): “I don’t want to lose you too, Koutarou-san” -> “I don’t want it to be anyone else but you, Koutarou-san.” The one on P27 currently sounds like she has a regretful past experience with another partner which is not implied in the slightest in the original. Click to expand... Thanks for the corrections
AlexEliot said: Mistranslations on P26 and P27. “I love you so much Kiyo-chan” -> “There is no one else for me but you, Kiyo-chan.” And on P27 (the actually significant one): “I don’t want to lose you too, Koutarou-san” -> “I don’t want it to be anyone else but you, Koutarou-san.” The one on P27 currently sounds like she has a regretful past experience with another partner which is not implied in the slightest in the original. Click to expand... Thanks for the corrections
Siranto1 Dex-chan lover Joined Sep 23, 2019 Messages 1,281 Aug 28, 2024 #24 Guess it should be tagged as an oneshot and complete instead of ongoing
R redscizor Dex-chan lover Joined Feb 19, 2021 Messages 2,384 Aug 30, 2024 #25 I dont understand the problem between they
Sh4dey Dex-chan lover Joined Feb 13, 2018 Messages 667 Aug 31, 2024 #26 So, I think I am wrong here. The story sounds like they have a sexless marriage IRL, Yet the dream world is like they get naughty play, But He talks like he gets no play. So Does he or Does he not bust in his dreams?
So, I think I am wrong here. The story sounds like they have a sexless marriage IRL, Yet the dream world is like they get naughty play, But He talks like he gets no play. So Does he or Does he not bust in his dreams?