Succubus na Kimi wa Otto wo Otosenai - Ch. 1

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Kino is served.

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Mistranslations on P26 and P27.
“I love you so much Kiyo-chan” -> “There is no one else for me but you, Kiyo-chan.”

And on P27 (the actually significant one):
“I don’t want to lose you too, Koutarou-san” -> “I don’t want it to be anyone else but you, Koutarou-san.”

The one on P27 currently sounds like she has a regretful past experience with another partner which is not implied in the slightest in the original.
Thanks for the corrections
 
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Guess it should be tagged as an oneshot and complete instead of ongoing
 
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So, I think I am wrong here.
The story sounds like they have a sexless marriage IRL,
Yet the dream world is like they get naughty play,
But He talks like he gets no play.
So Does he or Does he not bust in his dreams?
 

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