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Imagine how much calcium those bitches need, look at dem horns
I'm pretty unsure about that monologue, myself. I had assumed that it had meant that there were two "areas", one where the humans live, and another, where the dragons/goblins/succubi/etc. live, and Finaire is within there.Page 22 is kind of confusing to parse. Anyone reading the raw having second or third opinion?
The demon’s territory here refers to Malt’s territory, right?
Or is there another larger territory (beyond the succubus’ territory) behind them and he’s referring to that.
The proportions of the characters themselves, are perfectly fine.badly proportioned? What is that supposed to mean?
In the original text, I also felt that the first statement (the forest divides human and demon’s territory) and the next statement (planning on forming relationship with human territory) seems disconnected, at least with regards of their position.I'm pretty unsure about that monologue, myself. I had assumed that it had meant that there were two "areas", one where the humans live, and another, where the dragons/goblins/succubi/etc. live, and Finaire is within there.