That one shot of her on the toilet and you can just make out her panties looking drenched
fixed the mistakes. your comment about the credit page is probably valid but it has too much aura for me to change@dasdafd typos
Pg 7: supplmental -> supplemental
Pg 8: Some foods it's easy → Some foods that are easy
Pg 9: atleast -> at least
Pg 13: Missing crossbar I in "I'm"
Also this isn't about the manga itself, but I just wanted to say dark text on dark colours in your credits page is a little hard to read at a glance lol