I would've been totally down if she never went back again and accept this as her life, all "Red River/Anatolia Story" like. But we could do this too, I guess. I personally think this was executed pretty well/a good chapter and I liked that she has a brother. It'd be cool to see her struggle a little more in the future, expand maybe on her parents before she decides to go back all Inuyasha style but maybe that'd detract a bit too much. Suijin's gotta work out his problems though, I get that he's a God but he's also a psychopath, you can't just throw her between timelines and put her in a dream then sulk about it. I'm expecting her to fight her way back and talk some semblance of sense into him if she could get a chance instead of some S-suijin-sama?! and give me some Kamisama Kiss vibes.
D-DOUBLE TIME IT, AMNESIA, AMNESIA RECOVERY, TIME TRAVEL AND LONG LOST SIBLING IN TWO CHAPTERS C-COMBO-B-BREAKER