Surviving in a Romance Fantasy Novel - Ch. 16

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This might be interesting but the art is a bit... odd, everyone looks so young... too young... And the pace of the story is a bit fast, almost like you're supposed to already have read the novel (if it has one). a bit cliche as well.
Then the translation, like it's ok but there's mistakes, quite noticeable ones as well, sometimes the sentences don't really connect to each other that well either. It's understandable for sure, but it feels... rough.
 
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The art is interesting in that the demons was barely drawn and the fight scene was avoided because if you look at the scenes when the red haired maid was fighting the demons, it was actually not great.
 

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