Suterare Elf-san wa Sekai de Ichiban Tsuyokute Kawaii! - Ch. 6.2

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4th wall break?
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this is a valid question and one I have myself, because this pacing feels horrible to be honest
It’s like SAO pacing and about as asspull heavy as SAO too. Maybe even bit more? Just lesbian. Like the premise sounded a bit overdone but fun but given the absolute wreck of the pacing and the, interesting writing so to speak. The pace is so fast that I doubt this lasts long so I’ll stick around but the entire story feels so ready to throw away the main character’s actual resolve. She’s having a personal dilemma that both feels like it should have been early and later simultaneously and it’s juxtaposed against her treating her girlfriend as real anyways. Like she’s “using” her but only when the writer wants to make a point of it. And the resolution is so ridiculously obvious too: she’ll eventually abandon her escapist fantasy and choose to live with her girlfriend. It feels like someone set up a really barren skeleton of an outline and then just decided to use that as the plot itself.
 
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I hope this will break through 50 chapters somehow, I wanna see Ayano and Homura together!!
 
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Ain't no way the goddess just pulled the we aren't so different you and I
She saying that like she doesnt look eerily similar (identical) to another goddess from another rui tsukiyo work who dropped hundreds of people into a country with the express purpose of killing 1 5'6 tomboy meanwhile ayano just wants a nice job and a hot girlfriend
 
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Well, it only took her 6 chapters to realize making strong bonds will only make it hard to leave when the time comes. I just hope this "drama" don't last too long or make her do some stupid decision like breaking with her wife all of a suden...

Also, Goddess, if you want to make happy your audience just let them have some steamy, hard, prolonged, uncensored, sweaty and sweet sesbian lex. I can assure you, that's all the enterteinment we want-
 
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I know it's super cringe to do the "we're not so different you and I," thing but she isn't entirely wrong. Godess is sadistic which is the main difference. She and who ever else want to be entertained. Ayano just wants to have her wish granted and to do that she needs the help of her wife who she is lying to. They're both using people to get what they want although ayano has no malicious or sadistic intent. The end result is the same. Selfishness.

Ayano has to change her priorities or she will continue to be a selfish lying partner even if she doesn't intend to be. How would you feel if the person you truly love wanted a wish that would end with you being abandoned after everything you've been through together. To find out you're not the most important thing to them. A career as a voice actor is more important than you. That's soul crushing.

Obvi godess and ayano are not the same same, but you can argue that they are both selfish in their goals. This is the moment where ayano has to come to contemplate her true desires. Does she love her wife more than she loves the spotlight?

I am also curious to see if ayano will ever be reunited with her mother.
 
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Well, it only took her 6 chapters to realize making strong bonds will only make it hard to leave when the time comes. I just hope this "drama" don't last too long or make her do some stupid decision like breaking with her wife all of a suden...

Also, Goddess, if you want to make happy your audience just let them have some steamy, hard, prolonged, uncensored, sweaty and sweet sesbian lex. I can assure you, that's all the enterteinment we want-
This ain't that lesbian brothel manga man... but I wouldn't mind a chapter of that sprinkled in somewhere. Romance is so exciting :hearts:
 

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