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- Sep 13, 2024
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It’s like SAO pacing and about as asspull heavy as SAO too. Maybe even bit more? Just lesbian. Like the premise sounded a bit overdone but fun but given the absolute wreck of the pacing and the, interesting writing so to speak. The pace is so fast that I doubt this lasts long so I’ll stick around but the entire story feels so ready to throw away the main character’s actual resolve. She’s having a personal dilemma that both feels like it should have been early and later simultaneously and it’s juxtaposed against her treating her girlfriend as real anyways. Like she’s “using” her but only when the writer wants to make a point of it. And the resolution is so ridiculously obvious too: she’ll eventually abandon her escapist fantasy and choose to live with her girlfriend. It feels like someone set up a really barren skeleton of an outline and then just decided to use that as the plot itself.
