Thanks. MTL is always difficult, but always better than nothing, especially if there isn't any active groups translating. If we complain too much, we ought to help do some of the things too.
One thing though, is that I think some areas that should be names should be left untranslated. The cat's or demonbeast's name on page 6 is something along the lines of Tsukuyo which can translate to Moon or Moonlight Night. See when it was introduced as a cat/demonbeast and named back in chapter 2 on https://mangadex.org/chapter/515329/26