Suterareta Tensei Kenja ~Mamono no Mori de Saikyou no Dai Mateikoku wo Tsukuriageru~ - Vol. 3 Ch. 26

[MangaDex]

 

[Quin15]

Who tf is Palamos...

 

[trenslime]

thank god you only did 1 chapter, you were terrible

 

[MyBuddySuperFly]

Remember Palamos, guys?
No?
Okay.

 

[Seraphus]

If you want to get into translation, the words themselves were done very well.

The variance of the main characters' name was very jarring, and you've made some serious mistakes with punctuation.

A proofreader can correct some of it, but what you really need is an Editor.
They usually get paid (an editor, that is), so... be aware.