why the fuck does the MC have
his back to the meshe wires ?? like wtf. Thats so incompetent. Thats fucking noob mistake level. You dont turn your back to them, fucking idiot.. And of course they were going to eat through it dickhead. How fucking stupid. Wow, now your surrounded dipshit, without the plot armour which you will get, it be an easy death for the both of you.
Why am I reading this, bird brain of an author. Its fucking terrible.
but on a lighter note, this should be been a comedy (fails as an action).. the bug should of said to the guy "not today junior" then then pulled him off. Then we could of least laughted. and not take this peice of shit writing seriously.
This should of just been a comedy of people getting eaten by bugs. and the MC should of been a clown who worked for a circus. Does the editor not tell the author how shit this is ?
@Obsidians yeah, I didnt get to that part yet
im sure I could bring up a long list of mistakes if I could be fucked too. It be like me doing a CinemaSins