Tabun Kanojo wa Datsuzei Shiteru - Ch. 2 - This Girl Is Probably Trying to Bribe Me

[ysil69]

Not sure how a romance tag applies here. They're barely friends.

 

[Reisen]

If you're going to end it after 2 chapters and only make it a 2-shot, at least close some of the plots you made xD

 

[Saybah]

I'm so confused

 

[Exkalamity]

I will give it at most 10 chapters or realistically 5 chapters before it gets boring and dumb if this somehow get serialized.

I really can't see how to go beyond 10 chapters without using common tropes.

I could see this as a rom-com with interesting tidbits about white collared crime. Also MC's parents prolly work at the tax agency. Probably descendants of the guy who took out Al Capone.

 

[RollOmega]

where is sex?

No can do. That would make him an accomplice.

 

[tvih]

If you're going to end it after 2 chapters and only make it a 2-shot, at least close some of the plots you made xD

What needs closing? He promised not to tell anyone about her hobby, and she wasn't evading taxes to begin with. I mean he didn't find out that she wasn't evading I guess, but that's about it.

 

[raze2012]

If you're going to end it after 2 chapters and only make it a 2-shot, at least close some of the plots you made xD

what threads? She doesn't actually evade taxes and he believes that she'll do the right thing. successful coverup of horny FMC!

 

[Gravitypull]

I uh....I guess that's the end lol

 

[xyzzy]

This dude is just Bucciarati

 

[2hu_ism]

Kasune : Wanna commit tax evasion in my room later, Osamu-kun ?

Osamu : Nah, that's against the laws and you should stop it.

Osamu 10 years later

 

[luigiymario2]

I wish she had confessed to him that she wasn't really avoiding taxes XD

 

[MisterMango]

I think it would be worse as a serialization. It's fine the way it is.

 

[Asteric]

That's it...? No it can't be-! Where's the rest of it?

 

[Doomroar]

If there's money in the envelop it will count as a bribe...

 

[casgar]

I couldnt say this back when I watched bocchi the rock but I can say it now Just like me fr fr

 

[Kuasha0]

Kiss nano??

 

[ieatass69]

Bro will never get scammed with that kind of mentality

scammed into marrying her in a few years

 

[popo53414]

Bwahahahahahahaha

 

[ForPain]

Ah, the joys of Youthful White-Collared Felonies.

 

[Gustbk]

Yeah…the writing is fun but I kinda do wish she was evading taxes but only cared about wanting to show him she’s not a porn addict.

Also it might be a pet-peeve but they made her too perfect for someone who avoids school to draw porn at home.