Tachinomi Izakaya de Kuudere Downer-kei Joshidaisei ga Tonari ni Kuru Hanashi - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

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Page 16, is she saying she'd drag him home with her? That was genuinely hard to understand
It read to me like she was being intentionally vague. The reason it wasn't written more "you can get me home" in a friendly rather than flirty way was the use of the word もらう, which means to get someone to do something.
 
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一緒に電車に乗ってもらうから
一緒 together
電車 train
乗って to ride
もらう to make/to get someone to do something
I've changed the wording to make it sound less like she's dragging him back to her apartment as that's perhaps the way it came across.
 
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一緒に電車に乗ってもらうから
一緒 together
電車 train
乗って to ride
もらう to make/to get someone to do something
I've changed the wording to make it sound less like she's dragging him back to her apartment as that's perhaps the way it came across.
I think it was good. The flirty ambiguity came across with the translation you chose.

Himi seems into him, enough to keep coming back precisely because he is normal with her and of course teasing him is now fun. I feel like the one time he does take her seriously and make a move she will freak cause it will be outside what she has built up in her mind as "their dynamic."

That or some catalyst will make them cross a line closer than just open flirty banter on a Friday night. Either way, fun series and interested for more.

Thanks for the tl
 
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I think it was good. The flirty ambiguity came across with the translation you chose.

Himi seems into him, enough to keep coming back precisely because he is normal with her and of course teasing him is now fun. I feel like the one time he does take her seriously and make a move she will freak cause it will be outside what she has built up in her mind as "their dynamic."

That or some catalyst will make them cross a line closer than just open flirty banter on a Friday night. Either way, fun series and interested for more.

Thanks for the tl
Yeah, agreed. The original also fit well with him saying "so... that means..." at the end. Leaving more up in the air and making it seem like he assumes he's getting an invite in or something, but I can also see where BeanBeanBean was coming from. But, it's changed now lol.
 
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The only way she could be baiting him harder is to start throwing actual bait at him.

Though she almost gave the game away when she started pouting about the bartender friend getting walked to the station and not her.
 
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In a keywords context, Suggestive does not mean chaste teasing and low-key flirting. I feel like this is a bait and switch.
 

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