"I have a proposal" for.. what? Exactly? It was decided. It's over. MC won. Move on with the story, maybe have some actual educational content in the class since they seem to have received zero education so far?
And what kind of presumption is that? "There was a girl here, you obviously saw her naked." How does Leticia even know the girl's personality? She met her ONE TIME and then they fought! And what kind of girl walks into the home of a married couple she met one time and just drops her clothes?
This is frustrating to read, I want actual story. It started so good and it's 11 chapters in and running down a checklist of cliches.
And what kind of presumption is that? "There was a girl here, you obviously saw her naked." How does Leticia even know the girl's personality? She met her ONE TIME and then they fought! And what kind of girl walks into the home of a married couple she met one time and just drops her clothes?
This is frustrating to read, I want actual story. It started so good and it's 11 chapters in and running down a checklist of cliches.