Taimashi Tensei ~Kakoku na Eroge Sekai de Kitsunegao no Kansaiben na Shouwaru Otoko wa Donai Surya Ee desu ka?~ - Ch. 1 - A man named Naoshi Katsumic…

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Honestly not a fan of this release. Mixed up pronouns, reactions that make no sense in context, and the whole thing just reads extremely awkward, likely the result of a very literal translation.

Would've really helped if someone had proofread it, even if it was just another AI.

And yes, a rough translation is better than nothing, but that's a low bar.
 
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From the synopsis it seems interesting, but something feels off when i'm reading this. I'm not hooked yet but we'll see how it goes
 
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story seems interesting. would be nice to see a re-release or 2nd group later to fix the errors dotted throughout, but overall I can at least follow what is happening without my head hurting.
 
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I was hoping someone would pick this up.
Here's hoping they fix the translation down the line.

MC got that Gin Ichimaru aura (edit: apparently Naoya from JJK??) and FMC is basically Yatsu Murasaki.

Already a 10/10
 
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This MC is literally just Legally-Distinct-Naoya Zen'in! At least the setting is something different for a Villainess story, the MC acts like a villain pretty well and it's not often we get an Itome character as the lead.
 
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Villainous MC is the new meta eh. Eh at least better than your avg isekai beta type. :pepehmm:
 

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