Takabisha na Ojou-sama ga Kanzen Haiboku Suru Made

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This one takes the cake. Out of more than 100 garbage twitter/pixiv manga I have seen this is the one. The usual POV (probably mangaka self-insert) nonsense with the main character either reacting to things the reader didn't see or things said by a second character (in most cases the love interest) the reader wasn't shown in any way. At least she isn't repeating what the other person, who is almost never shown has said, just to make up a poor excuse for dialogue. All these characters, who are mostly girls, could just be hallucinating. Even the drawings are worse than the usual. Her eyes are too far apart in the first two chapters, arguably in the third one also and in the first chapter her eyes aren't looking at the same spot. It's a minor flaw, but she already looks unnerving without that. The shading is incosistent. She is wearing a black piece of clothing for the first three chapters that is partly hatched compared to the rest of the picture, which is colored one tone of gray against the white with small spots of black. The backgrounds have one fading color turning to white at least. Oh the necklace or whatever is also hatched. You can see it if you zoom in enough. The black skirt looks like its being shone upon by a second light source that only shines on the skirt and then the ribbon ruins the shading of the skirt. The character is one dimensional. There is no plot apart from her plans being foiled without any buildup, or introduction. This for now at least sits upon the mountain of garbage I have seen (when it comes to non-h). It's uninspired, it lacks creativity, it's visually unappealing and incoherent. What makes someone feel the need to publish this? Why not work on it a for a bit longer? It didn't have to be this bad. 1/10
 
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I'd like to point out that the title "Until My New Teacher Is Totally Defeated" is actually incorrect, because it's the complete opposite of the title "Takabisha na Ojou-sama ga Kanzen Haiboku Suru Made"; as the "Takabisha na Ojou-sama" part in the title is explicitly referring to the arrogant ojou-sama and the attempt to defeat her, not the first-person POV teacher.

Nowhere does the JP title say "Atarashii Sensei" (new teacher) so, I'd even say that it's a mistranslation (if not outright trolling), since it conveys the opposite meaning.
 

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